感谢活动组织者并建议改进 · Thank a workshop organiser
You attended a free gardening workshop at a community centre. Write an email to the organiser, Pat. In your email:
- Thank the organiser for the workshop.
- Describe something useful you learned.
- Suggest one improvement for a future workshop.
Write 80–120 words. You have 9 minutes.
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参考表达
Dear Pat, Thank you for organising the gardening workshop last Sunday. The demonstration of how to grow herbs in small containers was especially useful, as I only have a small balcony at home. I have already planted some basil using the method you showed us. For a future session, could you provide a short printed guide with the main steps? It would help participants remember the advice when they start gardening at home. I really enjoyed the friendly atmosphere and would be pleased to attend another workshop. Thanks again for your time and effort. Best regards, Avery
中文解析
感谢邮件也需要完成任务。用具体学到的内容支持感谢，再用改进建议帮助未来活动；不必只堆叠 good、great、wonderful。
自查清单
- 感谢组织者
- 说明学到的实用内容
- 提出一项改进建议
- 称呼、结尾与收件人关系一致
- 全文约 80–120 词，检查语法和拼写
三个要点，逐项找到证据
参考范文约 97 词。本站按英文词组估算，考试以现场字数计数器为准。
感谢组织者
Thank you for organising the gardening workshop last Sunday
说明感谢的具体活动和日期。
说明学到的实用内容
how to grow herbs in small containers
给出具体收获及在公寓阳台应用的场景。
提出一项改进建议
provide a short printed guide
建议与复习课堂步骤有关，有清楚的理由。
常见错误，怎么改
待改进Thank you for organise the workshop.
改写Thank you for organising the workshop.
介词 for 后接动名词。
待改进Everything was good. Make it better next time.
改写A short printed guide would help us remember the main steps.
用具体建议和理由替代空泛评价。
带走一个表达
It would help participants remember
解释建议的作用：help someone do something，后面接动词原形。
范文是一种写法。自己的回答只要切题、清楚、得体，就不必与范文逐字相同。
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